by CountlessMoments Nov 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The power you have is very strong, |
Thats cute I feel the same way because theres some days i cant see ma baby |
by Sarah
I love it, but on the second to last line, i think that you should change the word dough to doubt. No offense. But i think it would make the poem better. I like it a lot. |