Comments : Can't Wait

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    I love it, but on the second to last line, i think that you should change the word dough to doubt. No offense. But i think it would make the poem better. I like it a lot.

    --Raven

  • 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    Thats cute I feel the same way because theres some days i cant see ma baby