Lovely,
You expressed yourself beautifuly.

Your rhyming scheme was quite well done, and each stanza had so much feeling, and was very descriptive, using lots of metaphorical imagery

5/5

Impressive. I love your title. I love your poem in general, 5/5

Excellent poem, lovely to read. The flow was smooth and even, the imagery was amazing. I loved the way that you used repetition and your rhyme scheme. Keep up the good work! =^.^= *5/5*

This was good, and the nature of it was beautiful. However, I found it quite hard to read. You have quite a number of mistakes, which I thought didn't help the flow at all.

Apart from that, though, it really was wonderful.

This was good and quite pretty good job keep it up

Aww, very sweet poem. It seems like you wrote this poem with a lot of emotion and the flow just fit perfectly with the poem. I loved it. Except, there's a couple of grammatical errors. 5/5 <---still.

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Now see, usually I'm just not a fan of love poetry, and even less of a fan of poems that rhyme~
But this, now this is definitely worth some praise!
Firstly, I loved the repetition in the start of each stanza, it added familiarity and I felt drawn to reading it.
And the stanzas were well written too! You did the rhyme scheme justice but didn't overdo it or exaggerate~
5/5, great job!

Beautiful. Everything about this was just flawless. The imagery was wonderful and the story you told was amazing. Well done *5/5*

This one is soo sweet!!
keep up the great work!

Well, to be honost towards the end of the poem you started to loose my attention. I think that the peice kind of dragged on. The beginning was great and your love was expressed beautifully. Great job!

Amber...

Great Poem I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

The last stanza was by far my favorite, i really dont like being critical, but i felt the repetition was a little confusing and i starting drifting away from the content, but after re-reading it and ignoring that, i enjoyed it much more, and thourouhly enjoyed it, the content was wonderful and the piece was very well written..nice job...
john

The first time we met, I ain't get an impression
^ "ain't" doesn't make sense here, did you mean "didn't" and also, don't use ain't because it is slang.

I have written more than hundred poems
^ after "than" you need to put an "a"

Thanks for the good time you ever gave to me
^get rid of "ever" and put "all" in before "the"

A little love I kept seems to find an end
^ "A" should be "The" and i don't understand how this connects to the line above it..

Maybe later, but seems I always give it a damn
^ make this "Maybe later, but I always seem to give a damn"

That's when everyone talking about the chance
^ what? i don't understand this.

One step closer, but then why I always in a tramp
^ do you mean a "trap" not a "tramp"? because you cannot be inside a tramp.

Maybe we can have everything like before
^ this didn't really sound right to me, not sure why though.

This stupid love may had us a friend no more
^ this isn't right. i'm not sure what to do to it though. maybe say "This stupid love made us have no friends anymore"

Well, this was a sweet poem. I liked the last two lines. However, i felt that throughout the poem you only used words/lines so that they fit in with the rhyme scheme. That was not good. Try and not use a rhyme scheme and just write because by using one you limit yourself and it turns out sounding bad. Also, before posting this on here put it through microsoft word to check your grammer. I liked the repitition of "Little Lady Love" but maybe try and add in more metaphors and similies or some more interesting wordss. Oh and I liked this line "The road is dark and there are no more lamps". Nice job. 4/5

I liked this. Though I found a little mistake in it which kind of reuined the flow. Just a few grammer issues. This was interesting. I didn't feel the emotions coming from it as much as your other pieces though. Still good. Overall nice work. ~mel

Little Lady Love,
You might have known what I felt deep inside
I'm looking at your shine, a little guiding light
That I'm thinking about you night after night
Once again, I'm sorry if it all wasn't right

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I really enjoyed reading this, all the stanzas matched and it flowed great :)

keep it up

Aww such a beautiful poem, loving your friend is never easy :) this poem is really good, very well structured>>not that i no much bout poetry, ive only been writing for a couple pf months :s still thats my opinion :)

The poem is really good...
the rythm is great but the rhyme seems a little bit forced at the beginning...
the poem itself is really sweet...
it sounds like a song, don't know if it was supposed to be one, though...=)
overall a great poem
5/5
*keep going*
isabel

This poem really flows. I think it will make a great song!

I loved it! You are a talented writer and it sounded so sweet.

I love the repitition and the flow and the scheme! it was a really great piece all around