This is really well written, I think the first 2 stanzas are a good setup for the almost surprise ending. I'm sure anyone who reads this is going to get an eye opener, very well done. Keep up the good work. ~Zach

Aww you cutiepants, you need to eat more choco it makes your happy genes work.
The poem itself was so strong, emotions clear and powerful and very touching, easy to relate to and understand which really helps to connect with the reader!
Brilliantjob on this! 5/5

Well done... the visualization of being cut and a knife is a good way of portraying ur pain

Oohhh I sooo love this poem.
It's really good!! I mean it.
I'm definitely going to read more of your poems:)!
And I can totally relate.
(Although I do hope you've never been cut by a knife... Cause that really isn't the solution...)
Love, Sarah x

This poem was very sad yet so nice... i like the flow of this poem... and most of all u did great on it.. =]

luv courtney

Sad sad sad

i hope you feel better someday

I wonder is sadness our only fears
look at me saying quotes for a comment great job.

God i dont know if this poem is about you but if it is then i know how you must feel, i'm going through the same thing right now , it hurts i know but with time .