by firexdancer Nov 12, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
A murmur, spreading through the crowd, |
by Melpomene
The first two stanzas I loved the flow but after that it seemed to go off a fair bit. I liked the meaning portrayed behind this piece I do agree it speaks the truth. I can't find why the poem was rocky I think just some of the words didn't go together so well. Overall still a good read. Well done. ~Mel |
by Esther
Numb...is what killers are..they become hollow..or they'd never be able to kill innocent life; |