Daddy, i'm dead

by Abu3li   Nov 12, 2007


My father tapped on my shoulder
Telling me, sonny, be bolder

Dear son, you gotta be stronger
So you can happily live longer

I said daddy what is wrong
Is it me or the sad song

In your eyes, he said, lies a deep sorrow
As if you don't you wanna see tomorrow

Dear son, this isn't right
Don't give up before you fight

I looked at him with my tears held
While my heart with anguish filled

I managed a sad smile and said
Daddy forget me, I'm dead

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is very very good. So sad, yet it has a meaning that you can't really forget.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow!!!
    I loved the way u ended it
    its so saaaaaaad
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MzLonely

    Wow veryyy niceee =] so touching .. keep it up !

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm it was pretty good! 4/8

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it
    I kinda lacked emotion for me though
    but nice right anyways
    4/5

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