Its a lil short but its touchiNg..

GJ..

OMG! im balling right now! this was like the best poem ive ever read I sooooo get it!

5/5 amaising emotion... sch wonderful charater... so sad and gripping well done... keep it up!
-Marina

Awh, this is really making me sad! I like it a lot, but if it was just a smidge longer, it'd be even better. Keep this up, this poem is really good. =)

It was a very interesting poem. I liked it. I liked your use of words. It didn't flow as well as I would have liked though. Well done! Keep writing!

Cayce

I don't understand what you're dying for....still, it's a sad poem.a lil scattered,but pretty good.

I liked it
I kinda lacked emotion for me though
but nice right anyways
4/5

Hmm it was pretty good! 4/8

Wow veryyy niceee =] so touching .. keep it up !

Wow!!!
I loved the way u ended it
its so saaaaaaad
5/5

This is very very good. So sad, yet it has a meaning that you can't really forget.