Used to be fun

by Esther   Nov 12, 2007


Now I've started
I cannot stop;

This used to be so much fun..

Now its not..

And I can't remember when it changed...

I cannot stop..I need a spliff..so much

I need the thrill..to get me through

The buzz..I cannot sleep without it..

Why..did i start?

When will I stop..

...This never ending downwards spiral..

A vacumn of darkness

I wish I'd never started

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I think I know where you a coming from
    I enjoyed readind this one

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Wow this is a really interesting peom... It is really great... I love the word choice you used... their is and amazing amount of emotion in this one poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply great. I love it!!! 5/5 from me. You definitely have talent!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I really liked this piece,
    I liked how it expressed the feeling of someone going in a downward spiral and can't stop.

    It was an interesting poem.

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