by velvet kissesâ„¢ Nov 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
What I've learnt; is that when I fall |
by KJ
Beautifully written. You did a great job with the rhyme scheme and format. But what I really enjoyed was the true emotion and voice. I love poems that makes the reader feel as if he/she is the writer. Amazing job. 5/5 |
I like it very much :) 5/5 |
by Jackie
A beautiful but sad poem, very good 5/5 |