Dark Tranquility

by Allison   Nov 12, 2007


Over the mountains of thought,
Past the burning bridges,
Through the rivers of time,
Gasping for breath and knowledge.

Caught between two different worlds,
No one can hear my screams,
Lost in my own imaginations,
No strength to lift the screen.

I am slowly falling,
Under the star filled skies,
Gently my mind is failing me,
I can no longer breathe.

Floating off into space unknown,
I find that love is lost,
Forever I shall live in silence,
In my dark tranquility.

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  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Great write, :-) not as dark as the title made it sound but that's fine, thanks for taking time to read my poem, take it easy and keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    The flow was amazing..
    It was a very deep piece.
    Your imagery worked really well
    It was a quite nice a dark poem...

    i really liked.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I really like the flow and your imagery. This was really great and deserve 5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    O_o. Wow.
    This was absolutely stunning. :D Everything was... wow. - I love it. <3 The flow was flawless, the imagery was great (especially in the 1st stanza), the vocab was beautiful... and overall, it was just fabulous. :) Overall: 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

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