Look into her eyes
and you'll see
the pain she has
locked inside
almost ready to burst
with all the sadness and anger
so she grabs her razor
looks at the shiny object in her hand
and shoves it into her skin
as she watches the blood run
down her arm
and onto the floor
she realizes
she doesn't want to die
but its too late
:o. the ending was unsuspecting. but i like it.
the poem was somewhat suspenseful and thatz
good b/c it made me want to.. HAVE to read
the rest. :] again, the emotion was nicely
captured. yet again, a great write. 5/5.