This is really good!

Very well done, great choice of words. Yet another beautiful piece of work from you. You've became one of my favorites! Keep up the good work. 5/5

Jeanette

Now this was certainly different to read, but very interesting, I love the word choice, this poem flows beautifully and really had all my attention, beautifully written and a really enjoyable piece to read. Congrats on an awesome poem!! xx