I can relate to this poem, as i'm sure many people can. It just sucks to feel that way. lol. I liked it though. The flow was good.

"nedding to find myself again
to help me make amens"

I think you meant "needing" and "amends".

Good job Monica! Keep writing!

Cayce

I really like this poem!
Its really good and i can relate to it.
I like the flow of this peom and everything goes good together.

Good gob!

Its realy good i like it alot