I have no idea what a "Naani" is Tim, but this was one hell of a statement,,in so little words, you conveyed a message so powerful yet so epic. I still say you are the best, and you prove it time and time again. Love ya, Denise

Oh sweet Tim... this poem is so sweet and reminds me of myself.

You seem to make this style look so easy, but I know how difficult it is to pack such a forceful punch in a few short lines.

You have done just that wonderfully with a perfect flow.

Oh, sweetie, just one question... when did you read my diary to find all this out about me lol?

~~Simply Me

Wow... this is filled with such powerful beauty and sadness which deeply touched me. Amazing poem, excellently written. You did great job with the form, too, and the whole piece is truly original and deep.
Keep up!

I loved this poem Tim, It was so beautiful. I tired this style and I found it really hard I think it's because I usually write long lined poems lol. This style you honestly made it look easy and I loved that about this poem. It was overall a gorgeous poem strung together nicely by you. Well done. ~Mel

You probably know this but, I absolutely adore short poems. The magical way that in a few short lines can express a hundred emotions and canvas a beautiful picture...truly fascinating.
I've never written one of these and I might try but you are a hard act to follow.
Love ya, Holly

Im speechless this poem was amazing