by Stephanie Nov 13, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The moment slips through my fingers; Lightly caressing my fingertips, |
by Lizaveta
And the title catches attention&fits the poem so well |
by Lizaveta
Omg this poem is just unique! i like it how you make your style of writing so different. the structure catches attention, and these short words separating stanzas emphasise emotions which flow through the poem! |
by pookiengurgi
I like the way you set up the paragraphs, it was an excellent write and everybody's comment was so true...shocking poem. |
by Lemma
Wow, the first thing that struck me about this poem was the title (which is obviously what made me read it in the first place!) It's a really clever idea and you've managed to effortlessly weave it into the poem itself. Great flow, an interesting sturcture that works really well. Some great rhyme there too. |
by jLegendc
Omg! i hav never read something like this.. everything is unique.. the structure and the way you expressed your emotions into words were just out of the ordinary! kudos to you! this is really awesome! =] |