This poem has alot of truth and emtion. i love how you wrote this.

Wow. That was amazing. The imagery was awesome. The emotion was BAM! right in your face. I loved every bit of it.

Did you see the gorgeous bruises left upon my pale, fragile skin that night?
Or did you overlook that mess you made? Pretend it simply wasn't in your sight?
As I choked out the screams, why didn't you dare look me dead in the eye?
Were you afraid you would see yourself... that a look would reveal all your little lies?

That stanza was my favorite. They were all great but that certain stanza stuck out. This was truly an amazing right. =]
5/5

Amber..

This was so amazing! Damn! I don't think I can express how damn amazing this piece is.

Did you see the gorgeous bruises left upon my pale, fragile skin that night?
Or did you overlook that mess you made? Pretend it simply wasn't in your sight?
As I choked out the screams, why didn't you dare look me dead in the eye?
Were you afraid you would see yourself... that a look would reveal all your little lies?

Omg! I loved that part of the poem it really stood out to me the most. You write with such sarcasm. I truely loved that. Well done on this poem. Your talented. ~Mel

Hehe...! kudos on the name and the poem!! great job on both!

I don't know what to say... this was simply amazing. There are no words everything was flawless you have so much talent!!!

This poem is amazing. i loved how you used single words in between each stanza and then just 'Love' at the end.. i loved it. great work

Omg! i hav never read something like this.. everything is unique.. the structure and the way you expressed your emotions into words were just out of the ordinary! kudos to you! this is really awesome! =]

Wow, the first thing that struck me about this poem was the title (which is obviously what made me read it in the first place!) It's a really clever idea and you've managed to effortlessly weave it into the poem itself. Great flow, an interesting sturcture that works really well. Some great rhyme there too.

5/5

Em xXx

I like the way you set up the paragraphs, it was an excellent write and everybody's comment was so true...shocking poem.

Omg this poem is just unique! i like it how you make your style of writing so different. the structure catches attention, and these short words separating stanzas emphasise emotions which flow through the poem!
5/5 and i put it in my fav's

And the title catches attention&fits the poem so well