I'll share with you

by msluckyone   Nov 13, 2007


I'll share with you the laughter.I'll share with you the tears.I'll share with you my life and be with you thoughtout the years.I'll share with you the good.I'll share with you the bad..I'll share with you the happy , and I'll share with you the sad.I'll stand by you always and forever you should know I will follow you to places that you shall choose to go.Your the man I love,the only man I adore.How much I need your loving only I can see.I know I need your presence to know that your near. I want nothing more then you and only you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ismelda Yvanna Peralta

    Nice poem....I like it a lot......

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    The emotion in this is fluid, yet you have to break up the lines. This is just one big paragraph. Try to break it up.
    Put each new sentance on a new line. If some are too long, break it up so it works better.
    Just a suggestion. But well done on the content. It's sweet. :]

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow this was really great, keep it up,
    i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
    I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
    Polaroid
    p.s GREAT JOB

  • 16 years ago

    by The Tay

    Awesome flow. lovely wording.

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