by nufia Nov 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
If forgetting you is as easy as erasing pencil marks, |
by Blissful
I just loved this. The painful love you described is something I am sure many can relate with. The first stanza was very strong and truly lured me in. |
by nufia
Thanks (: |
by Oracle
It's great how you created this. wonderful poem with the tones being just right.also, i love how you compared the emotion to those things in the beginning. dangerously close to cliche, but it worked out well in your poem. awesome job! |