It's great how you created this. wonderful poem with the tones being just right.also, i love how you compared the emotion to those things in the beginning. dangerously close to cliche, but it worked out well in your poem. awesome job!
:-)

Thanks (:

I just loved this. The painful love you described is something I am sure many can relate with. The first stanza was very strong and truly lured me in.

"Waking up each day with shattered yet high hopes,"
^beautiful line!

well done *5/5*