Questions

by Men   Nov 13, 2007


If I said I loved you
What would you say
Would you love me back
Or would you pushed me away

And if I make
The world stand still
Please look in to my eyes
And tell me how would you feel

And when the day come
That our worlds part
Would I be in your memories
Would I still be in your heart

Will you be thinking of me
As our graves are laid
And hearts rest at peace
As the memories fade

I want you to know
Our love will never end
Now let us rest
Now let hearts mend

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  • 16 years ago

    by kelly tavern

    Very poetic , the flow was really good on this poem this is my fave one from your work so far, keep it up & take care

    i rated it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title was just ordinary but the story of this poem was just wonderful. I really love this one. Maybe this is one of your best. Keep writing those good stuffs. 5/5 definitely!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    That was.... AMAZING....no no... BEAUTIFUL, no, no... i speechless, your a great writer, i love how you put words to feeling that a lot of people can expless. VERY VERY well written 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked some stanzas and then I disliked some stanzas I loved stanzas 3,4, and 5.
    I disliked stanzas 1 and 2 but it's a good thing that you pulled it together towards the end. 5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    I really like this poem
    its put together with thought but most of all feeling
    great work again

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