Blue.

by BlueDreams   Nov 13, 2007


Through the window streams the natural light
Yet again I have been up all night
Want to close my eyes, get some sleep
The stress is mounting, problems run deep

Knowing where I should be, That is in bed
Still I sit here, ceiling fan rotating over head
Illness is imminent, body in a weakened state
Some relief I must find, If not create

Its like I am punishing myself, some type of retribution
When all I want is the odd problem and many a solution
All alone, the walls are closing in fast
Unsure on how long things can last

My head is spinning and has a terrible ache
Too much confusion, this is becoming a trend I must break
Although the day now is bright and sunny
Same problems remain, work, love, and family

Yawning, mental and physical reserves are spent
Now I should be relaxing, be content
I don't know what is left, or what else I can do
I do know the sky and I have one thing in common, we both are blue.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I was totally drawn in by this write,Maybe because I have the same problem. I could totally relate.you are an excellent writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Overall I thought it was an okay piece. There were some bits I didn't like, like the last line (it was too long in my opinion) and some bits that I really liked, like 'Some relief I must find, If not create'. I'm intriguied by the way you structure your lines, very creative, I think.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Everyone feels this way atleast once in their life. The way you penned this poem is just amazing. Its been ages since I've been here, but glad to read this one. Keep it up friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    It's a beautiful poem..
    Very touching and sad.
    Wonderful, that's all I can say about it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    This was such a good poem! very well written xx