by BlueDreams Nov 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Through the window streams the natural light |
by Deana
I was totally drawn in by this write,Maybe because I have the same problem. I could totally relate.you are an excellent writer. |
Overall I thought it was an okay piece. There were some bits I didn't like, like the last line (it was too long in my opinion) and some bits that I really liked, like 'Some relief I must find, If not create'. I'm intriguied by the way you structure your lines, very creative, I think. |
Everyone feels this way atleast once in their life. The way you penned this poem is just amazing. Its been ages since I've been here, but glad to read this one. Keep it up friend. |
by Hebe
It's a beautiful poem.. |
by dora
This was such a good poem! very well written xx |