I absolutely loved this poem. it was full of wonderful expression, had a great flow, and kept me reading. its so sad, i can relate to it. anyways, i really liked this. keep it up : )5*5
Kimberly

This was great! A little dark, a lot of mystery... all around great! 5/5

You looked into my eyes and lied,
As you wiped away my falling tears,
Held me close, as I died in your arms;
And you chased away my fears.

That stanza was incredible! I loved it...it was extremely powerful and just horrifically beautiful (beauty in sadness). And the whole thing was composed very well. Great job!
~Midnight Sun