She Howls

by Unrequited   Nov 14, 2007


She sits at
a tilt
with sun-star eyes
in isolation
free
from the world

she craves to destroy loneliness.

a wolf-moon
in her heart
opaque
in her blind frustration
expects nothing
from a hero.
but she howls-

sings her lullaby
for those that cry
for those that die
they all die...

teardrops
upon her soul,
and you
will feel the age
in her dawn...

the sun will never rise.

wolf-moon
in her heart
in her heart
centered in a dream
of lovers;
her world is
made of ash.
but she howls-

sings her lullaby
for those that cry
for those that die
free
from the world.

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*a poem for someone who holds so much love for the world and everyone in it... if only we all had this much love to spread.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful write, straight from the heart!
    the flow was amazing and you expressed yerself so well.

    teardrops
    upon her soul,
    and you
    will feel the age
    in her dawn...

    the sun will never rise.

    i really liked those lines, they were so beautiful. they really caught my attention.
    you can make your words come to life, and thats a wonderful thing.
    job well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Good write..
    and wonderful imagery...

    'sun-star eyes'... wow very creative...

    just one suggestion - take care that the starting of each sentence is in capital...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Nebula

    This is Awesome. I always search for the Poems that I NEED to read more than twice to make sure I "get it all", this is definitly one of them. I can feel the saddness, lonliness and need to express pure emotions, and love the flow and structure. And I love wolves so ... bonus... ;) Great one.

  • 16 years ago

    by ShawdowDancer

    Nice poem its great

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    Amazing piece, different from anything I've read before. I can't express how much I like it. It is truly powerful and original, so deep and filled with metaphorical meanings. Unique write, excellently written from the beginning to the end. The imagery that you created is simply breathtaking.
    I can't chose my favorite part of the poem, whole piece is superb and outstanding.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me but you deserve more for this fantastic poem.

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