This is really great poem. The emotion is very well mixed and it's very well written. 5/5 from me!!!

Wow...
Amazing piece, different from anything I've read before. I can't express how much I like it. It is truly powerful and original, so deep and filled with metaphorical meanings. Unique write, excellently written from the beginning to the end. The imagery that you created is simply breathtaking.
I can't chose my favorite part of the poem, whole piece is superb and outstanding.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me but you deserve more for this fantastic poem.

Nice poem its great

This is Awesome. I always search for the Poems that I NEED to read more than twice to make sure I "get it all", this is definitly one of them. I can feel the saddness, lonliness and need to express pure emotions, and love the flow and structure. And I love wolves so ... bonus... ;) Great one.

Good write..
and wonderful imagery...

'sun-star eyes'... wow very creative...

just one suggestion - take care that the starting of each sentence is in capital...

keep writing..

A beautiful write, straight from the heart!
the flow was amazing and you expressed yerself so well.

teardrops
upon her soul,
and you
will feel the age
in her dawn...

the sun will never rise.

i really liked those lines, they were so beautiful. they really caught my attention.
you can make your words come to life, and thats a wonderful thing.
job well done.