Bladed action

Wow, this is quite powerful and different from anything that I've read before! Original poem, with effective repetition and greatly created dark atmosphere that haunts. Truly captivating piece, very intense.
I like the form of the whole poem, it is unusual but it helped to create amazing flow through the whole piece.
Well done!
5/5 from me

Interesting Sam....I like some of the repitition...

"Secrets held inside,
Forbidden passion.

Reminiscences aside,
Bladed action."

^ These are I feel the best lines....The flow is good on this piece.....nicely done. Take care, Debbie

Mhh, Sammy...
I am not sure what too make of this, even the dictionary could not help me understand this poem! Please pm me about the meaning of this latest piece by you, will you?
I will give you a 5/5 anyway because it looks beuatiful but I don't know what it's about, at least not exactly lol!

Ingrid