Comments : A moment

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody gets there moments, we just have to take advantage of them. Great job hun 5/5 xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-this was brilliant.
    Was very strong and emotive!
    I read a comment you made on one of my poems and thought i'd check your stuff out!
    Will be reading more of your poems later for sure!
    I especially love the line:
    "If ever there was a moment, a moment just like this,
    There would be nothing more to say, a memory of love's sweet endless bliss"
    That was beautiful.
    5/5 for this one.
    Keep writing,
    Aish
    xx