Wow-this was brilliant.
Was very strong and emotive!
I read a comment you made on one of my poems and thought i'd check your stuff out!
Will be reading more of your poems later for sure!
I especially love the line:
"If ever there was a moment, a moment just like this,
There would be nothing more to say, a memory of love's sweet endless bliss"
That was beautiful.
5/5 for this one.
Keep writing,
Aish
xx