Matt, this was really sweet. It was short but filled with a lot of emotion. |
Sorry, I meant to say Rob.. |
This is a really pretty poem... |
I like your poem alot. You have talent. I like your other poems to. |
Awww :) its short but really sweet |
by Katie
Aww. This one is really sweet. I love it. =] |
by Nix
Interesting poem, I think that it could be more powerful if you add some metaphors or use a more creative and original words but nice piece. You express emotions on very touching way, keep up! |
by Katelynn
Yeah i really like this one when i read it i wished i was the girl next door ...you have alot of feelings wow |