by The Black Rose Nov 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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They shout at me |
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Shit! i thought in the poem "you" were going to kill your self this is strong.passionate.powerful. 5/5 keep writing |
by TotaMariee
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Bloody heck! |
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Beautifullandpassionate |
by KJ
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WOW! What a perfectly written piece! I loved everything about it starting with the flow of it to the usage of vocabulary. Emotion was great by the way. All around great poem =} |
by Evil One
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Strong feelings, I know what it is to be like a freak, but we have to stick together, keep up the good writitng |