by kate
This is amazing, i love how you say something about your heart then face it against someone else's which is pretty good, i use to write alot and i think i had a poem like that, of saying something about myself then do it to someone else, I really liked this poem alot and im sure he loves you back no matter what even if they dont say it or isnt with you no matter what you cant fall out of love that quick and i dont think anyone wants to :] |
by Adelle
A good piece it flowed well however I feel you may have repeated the word "someone" to many times try using he/she. |
You are an amazing writer. you have talent. |