by Christina Nov 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I have all these feelings....and there spilling right out of my heart. Should I take a chance? Should I throw my heart in the middle of the street and hope you don't run over it? Every time I see you everything else disappears around me. The touch of your finger makes me want to crumble. I want to give you everything. every time you talk to me I just want to say, "I LOVE YOU!"...but I can't.....because I've told you that before and you've turned around and broken my heart. And every time you've broken my heart I've always gone back to you! Should I keep going back to you? Maybe if I don't you will realize how much you really would be missing. Should I walk out of your life for good? But then you would be out of my life and I don't think I could handle that. So should I just take that chance of you breaking my heart again, but trusting you not to!? |
by Krysten
I really liked that this is a prose poem and i can def relate to it. it shows the strugle tht i feel many teenage hearts (and adults alike) go through. good flow and word choice. 5/5 |
by Blissful
This is a position a lot of girls are in which makes this poem real easy to relate with. The emotions were real and I could truly feel what you were saying. One suggestion I can see is that it would flow better if it was broken up into stanzas. Well done. |