This is a position a lot of girls are in which makes this poem real easy to relate with. The emotions were real and I could truly feel what you were saying. One suggestion I can see is that it would flow better if it was broken up into stanzas. Well done.

I really liked that this is a prose poem and i can def relate to it. it shows the strugle tht i feel many teenage hearts (and adults alike) go through. good flow and word choice. 5/5