Yup soo true(good work!)

Thanks...this just happened to me!! and i realize that i was goen to be okay!

I liked this poem, I think that once again everyone can relate to your work.

because no guy is worth the tear
and the one that is WON'T MAKE YOU CRY!

I really liked those lines, a quote everyone has heard but does not want to believe in. Your poem gives the true reason why that is so true. Great job!

Amber :]]

This poem talks of a situation many people have been in and how it can hurt you so badly I like the subject you chose as you built on a well known quote.