by aDORKable x3 Nov 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You told me this morning you're leaving me - |
Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. Such a captivating and sad love story. I love poems that tell stories. You've expressed your emotions beautifully in this poem, the flow was amazing as well as the rhyming. The ending was also very well done and I loved how you incorporated the title into the last line. |
by damont
That is good. sad very sad but excellent. i love it. there is alot of flow and alot of feelings |