That is good. sad very sad but excellent. i love it. there is alot of flow and alot of feelings

Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. Such a captivating and sad love story. I love poems that tell stories. You've expressed your emotions beautifully in this poem, the flow was amazing as well as the rhyming. The ending was also very well done and I loved how you incorporated the title into the last line.

5/5 Definitely

Take Care!

-Shannon <3