Bryan bo Bryan, I love it . I like the whole symbolic crimson eyes thing . . . meaning like sleepless eyes or drunken eyes ? Maybe you didn`t mean it like that, but that`s how I took it lol . I didn`t even notice this was a sonnet when I first started to read, the style just sorta fit your words perfectly .

5.5
<3 !

A very heartfelt poem, full of emotion and sorrow. A very easy poem to relate to. great job.. grats

Bryan
your getting very good at the Sonnets.
This was a very sad and moving piece.

I yearn at night to smell your sweet perfume,
To be able to kiss your tender lips,
To see your beauty light up this dark room,
Forgot the feeling of your fingertips.

This stanza really stood out to me. Yearning for the one we love and the sadness when they are no longer there.
Great jpb!
Take Care Cindy

Like I said on your last sonnet I absolutely love them. Your word choice is so elegant and pure. This was such a heartfelt touching piece which flowed beautifully. Well done ~Mel