by lisabrighteyes Nov 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Laying down |
This is good... i like it |
by Marc Ortiz
Well it was a good poem. but I think it would be better if you used punctuation in this poem. :) |
Wow, it's a great poem and so deep that i can feel the emotion...5/5 |
Great poem love the reptition of deep deep dreamless sleep. Has a nice ring to it. |