Brown Eyed Girl

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 15, 2007


I'm that brown eyed girl
That you fell in love with
You fell in love with me
And my pretty brown eyes

I never give up on you
And I never tell you lies
You don't ask for much
Because I always give you all my love

I'm always down for you
No matter the situation
Whether it's something good or bad
I'll always be by your side

I show you respect
Even when we fight
I never disrespect you
And I'm glad you don't either

I'll never change you for anyone
Because you're very special to me
I'll always be the brown eyed girl
You fell in love with that night

[WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    This a really great poem. You are really good and you have great talent

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    YES U R!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It's an okay poem, I think to improve this poem you should use punctuations.. Coz a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune. Nonetheless it was a good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, this was very sweet. The flow in this was good as was the emotion. But the descriptions I felt lacked originality. Try and make your poem the one thats different, don't use common words and try and get a new feeling across that no one else has accomplished yet. Just try and be uniquee, nice job though. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Aww that is so sweet! This poem had a very nice flow and I just loved it! 5/5

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