I've read a few of your poems now and its obvious that you have a lot of love for this person. He is a lucky guy.

This poem I think flowed very well and was descriptive. Nice job.

This is a really sweet poem.. i like it a lot.

the story you developed with your words is a beautiful way and i hope you won the contest!
~sammie

I really like the last two lines they perfect the poem..keep it up 4/5

As said above..
I have also read a few of your poems, and in your work it is made quite clear how much you love this guy.
You guys are lucky to have a strong relationship:)

Keep the peices coming:)
--Elly

Aww that is so sweet! This poem had a very nice flow and I just loved it! 5/5

Awhh, this was very sweet. The flow in this was good as was the emotion. But the descriptions I felt lacked originality. Try and make your poem the one thats different, don't use common words and try and get a new feeling across that no one else has accomplished yet. Just try and be uniquee, nice job though. 4/5

It's an okay poem, I think to improve this poem you should use punctuations.. Coz a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune. Nonetheless it was a good poem.

YES U R!

This a really great poem. You are really good and you have great talent