This poem is absolutely amazing. Even though it was only three lines i really felt strong emotion coming from your words..i love it 5/5

Amazing.

Such power ... such meaning ... it was all just wonderful. This poem truly evoked emotion in me and the imagery was just haunting. The second line was penned beautifully, very eerie. Well done *5/5*

I loved this.

It reminded me of Harry Potters Dementors in an odd sort of way. It portrayed such a vivid picture in my mind f hooked creatures sucking the soul from human life. The atmosphere from this poem was really dark, eerie, intense and creepy. I love the style they are short simple and you created the Senyru perfectly. Well done. An awsome read. ~Mel

This is a great work. The structure matches off curse the matches the senryu. The metaphors here were the best thing which I liked 5/5