Hate, Due to You

by ihrtschlepper   Nov 15, 2007


I am not usually capable of hate,
but you deserve nothing less.
your hurtful looks and fake words
give me chills to this day.

the hurt you brought on me
goes deep in my soul
and the thought of forgiveness
is never contemplated

all the lies you whispered in my ears
drip like molten lava on my heart
and today and forevermore
will there be hate in my heart and soul
due to you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Ooh i loved this as well. I love how descriptive and passionate you are in your writing. It makes the poem so much more effective and interesting to read. I loved the detail in this and the imagery was great. Amazing job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This I truly did love!
    It was amazing, so short and simple yet it had a deep feeling to it.
    The peice flowed well, and you penned it nicely.

    Keep it up,
    --Elly.

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    "capabl eof hate" ="capable of hate"

    Fix that error.

    Other than that, excellent poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    "capabl eof hate" ="capable of hate"

    Fix that error.

    Other than that, excellent poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That was so deep and amazing. 5/5

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