by ihrtschlepper Nov 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Tu eres mi vida |
I loved the spanish in this poem. I speak decent spanish, so I understood it without the translation, but, it was beautiful. It created a beautiful flow in the poem, and gave it some flare. I really enjoyed that approach. Nice work. |
Beautiful, but short. Maybe you should write it in spanish first then in english. This way, it may confuse those that don't speak spanish. Yo te entiendo girl. Hiciste bien. 5/5 |