Would be stron
^ "stron" needs a "g" on the end.

but now they can just stand and watxh
^ "watxh" should be "watch"

an my love
^ I'm not sure what you were trying to say here but i think its "and" not "an"

Awh, I liked this. It was cute and I like the fact that you made yourselves birdss. Nice imagery and repitition. Good job love. 5/5

Beautiful, yet a bit confusing. Love the little emotion I got from this. 4/5

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Third stanza~
Maybe "fly awy" -> "fly away"?
Aisde from that, I really like it!
Good flow, well organized stanzas ans really good choice of vocabulary~
Great job!

This was really sweet. I loved it alot. The emotions portrayed were deep and the story behind it was original and capturing. Loved the way you started it. It had me hooked. This was a great poem. Well done. ~Mel