My Soulmate.

It was a sweet poem, flow is okay but you have some minir errors :)

First...

Capitalize the I's

And

(Youre) the light that brightens my dark mind
= You're

It flows pretty well, the sentence lengths are varied but not so out of whack that it becomes difficult to read.
Hmm~
Maybe seperating it into stanzas would help?
I don't want to tell you to change your work because it's up to you to do what you like with your own pieces~
^^
It was great, though, and I really really liked it~
Keep writing!

A beautiful Peice, full of heartfelt emotions.
It flowed pretty well, and was interesting.

Keep it up.
--Elly.

I thought this was a very nice poem and full of emotion. I agree with the comment on each line being a similar length. It's hard to do sometimes. But you can definitely feel the love and passion in this piece.

Nice job.

This was pretty good love. The flow was a bit off a points, try and make most of the lines about the same length and this will help improve this. I also liked how you used some more advanced vocabulary, try and use more of this. The emotions in it were quite clear as well. Nice job love. 4/5