Omg Bryce!!! This is so amazing! I love the melody of this poem, it makes me smile but when i read further, i start to cry with a chill down my spine. But I love it, I do!!!<3 You will go far with these poems my dear bryce :)

~*x*~CourtneyxHolland~*x*~

Kind of depressing...but good.

I like this poem

Great write! =]...short, but lots of emotion..i love it <3

Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5

It was written very brilliantly
I liked the flow very much and great choice of words
keep it up!
Lisa

Loved it!

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Wonderful. I just love short work, it eaams to say so much more. 5/5

You are a good poet, keep them good poems rolling....

Good Work(:

Wow..What a great poem!