What i am!!!

by cass   Nov 15, 2007


I am like a doll
i hear see and feel everything
yet cannot make a sound
i am like a baby
i cry and weep myself to sleep
and when i cry no one knows why
i am like a bee
i sting to protect myself
yet die anyway
i am like an ostrich
when faced with danger and problems
i bury my head and grieve
I'm not like a wolf
strong and in a pack
I'm not like a hero
I disappoint myself and everyone else

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem, to improve this I would suggest you to use punctuations and capitalize all the I's :)

    Nonetheless it was a good poem, keep up the good work my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Good poem keep up