I'm not really into reading haikus because to me, they aren't that much full of emotion. Although, I liked yours because I like any type of angel poem and this poem was about an angel so I'll still give a 5/5. Great job.

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Hmm. I'm not sure about the last line. It's giving me mixed thoughts. I cannot offer you any suggestions here, as I am not a Haiku expert - but if I think of an alternative I'll let you know. Nonetheless, you have kept to the structure well, employing imagery and the idea of the 'mystical flower' is also equally as vivid. Well done, once again :)

Sadly beautiful just from the little bit of words i felt strong emotions..keep it up 5/5

It's great and this genre is the genre I loved. It's 5/5!!!

The images here were flawless and amazing. 5/5

I really like this one.
I like the subject.
Think you wrote it very well.
Anyway, enjoyed reading it.
Take care

I don't really like haikus normally....cuz i feel like they can't express a whole feeling (but what poem can...?) but i adored this. so much. great job

"An Angel came down
In a mystical flower
As she tore her wings"

^ Such beautiful words you use! :)
- 'Mystical Flower' - makes me picture me looking up and seeing her slowly falling from the sky... as if she has control where she falls.
- 'Tore her Wings' - Such beautiful imagery! It makes me think of the angel.. and how she slowly falls... and her wings tearing.. it leaves such love and such a feeling of hurt also in my heart. It feels both lovely and sad.. as if the Angel has 'broken' her wings... and this could mean alot of things... but to me... it means she can't fly... which is what every Angel can do... and it hurts me knowing she can't fly.

Beautiful poem. Loved every bit of it!

` Keep it up! :)

` Good luck :)

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