Very beautiful poem. I've always happened to believe in angels and this is by far the best "angel" poem, I've ever read. You chose the right words to describe the poem. Definately a magnificent write. Great poem. 5/5

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I love this poem, it was so sweet. The flow was wonderful and your word usage was excellent. One thing bugged me though.

"The moment I gaze at her beauty,"

Was gaze suppose to be gazed? Though, I might have took it in the wrong tense. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

"The moment I gaze at her beauty,
I felt my heart melt like the winter snow."

The imagery within this piece is amazing. The use of similes and your rhetorical question at the start of the poem create an atmosphere for the reader. A very well delivered poem.

However, two points for 'improvement':
-In the quoted lines, just put a 'd' at the end of 'gaze' as the second line is in the past tense.
-Also, I can see that you have (perhaps unknowingly) involved enjambment. This does work in some areas of the poem, but I would suggest you place punctuation marks at the ends of certain sentences. If you re-read this a couple of times, without any particular tone, you will notice this.

Anyhow; this was a well written piece. Well done :)

This is a great writing. 5/5

Different but beautiful nevertheless you should continue writing i believe it will only get better 4/5

Yay. This peice was soo cute. I wish it was longer though. Lol. I always love reading your work. But the image you created was great and the emotion was pure. Great job!
5/5

Amber..

I love this one. Well written and you seem an expert in writing. The emotion flowed through and it's simply deep... Beautiful pieces 5/5 from me!!!

This was a well-written poem.
i think it would sound better with a rhyming scheme in each stanza.
but it's still good. my favourite lines;

'As the days, months and years have passed..
I just have to close my eyes...

And believe in guardian angels...'

keep it up.
can you cmnt my poem 'pretty words we'll never speak?'

thanksss :)
Vanessa

Marc,
Yay! I love this poem ^_^ I'm glad that you're starting to write again! That's a good sign ^_^
I really love the topic of this poem... gardian angels ^_^
I wouldn't change anything, so keep it up 5/5

Hari

This was was beautiful, amazing, breath-taking, and everything in between! I could picture every single line in my head as I read it. Have you ever thought about story writing? I loved it! Neat and organized, the work of a professional. Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Wonderfull poem!
I can see it in my mind. Great!

Love tis line:"
" And now I know she's the light I need... "
beautiful.
Enjoyed reading this one!
Take care

Beautiful, touching..what do i say more...excellent 5/5

This was a wonderful piece
very captivating and is a truly beautiful message.
keep it up!
Lisa

Beautiful. The second stanza was just flawless in your descriptions and details. The imagery was amazing and effective in getting your message across. I loved how you told a story and it just filled me up with hope because I too believe in guradian angels.

Well done *5/5*

Excellent I thought it ws creative and imaginative. I loved the ending very satisfying. The rhyming was a little off in the third verse. But it was still a well written poem. good job. 5/5

Wat a cute poem!!!
and it was very well written!
and with a great vocabulary it made the poem even better!!!
5/5

<3 i love you silly

This was deep... and well written! Your word choice was good, your flow was beautiful, and the concept was amazing! 5/5

This was a really sweet poem! Yes, I do believe in Gaurdian Angels! Haha. I loved your word choice, the imagrey was amazing! Even though it didn't rhyme (and I'm a big rhyme person) the flow was good! I enjoyed reading this one a lot! Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Very beautifully written. the emotions you
portrayed were outstanding. And this was
simply an amazing write. It;s interesting and
unique. definitely a 5/5. :]

I liked you imagery and the way you wrote it as a story of how you met your gaurdian angel. I enjoyed reading this.

Nice job!
*5/5