I loved the emotion in this poem. The imagery is amazing as well. I could picture the angel as I was reading the second stanza. I saw a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. They aren't something you hae to worry about too much in poem anyway. I have no suggestions or constructive criticism. It easily conveyed the message and story to me. I give it a 5/5 awesome! ^.^

Well im glad you started writing again, that piece was wonderful, for some odd reason when i get to the end of the stanzas i thought everything fit there, nice job 5/5

Wow i love it! so sweet!

I love Angels. You did a great job on this piece. The imagery is great.

Suddenly... her arms were around me..
She said, I will always be by your side...
As the days, months and years have passed..
I just have to close my eyes

I love this stanza. It paints such a peaceful picture for the mind.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

I love the whole angel topic
Its very beautiful!
^_^
5/5
Xoxo

Nice poem!!...

GOod thing you're starting to write again..
lols,,

5/5