Brothers

by Shadow   Nov 15, 2007


Brothers are grat things to have arent they?
well let me tell you.... bout a lil boy
age 6 he was ...named Ray

Ray, a boy who loved everything about this world
loved animals,plants, and really social
went and wore his favorite color
red was his color and no one elses
or so he thought
went shoppin with his older brother
they left the store and his brother went to grab the car
.....his brother heard a sound and Ray saw a lil light
he heard his brother scream in anguish and saw hi brother run towards him and couldnt understand y everything was red.... and blurry.. y his broter was crying... "whats wrong?" he asks. "im so sorry" his brother says. his brother screams for help and just then did the lil boy realize that the red was coming from him and he says " i knew red was my color"

i want everyone to know that i was that older brother
i watched my lil brother die due to all the gang activity in california. i hate gangs and i hate them even more now that they have taken the life of my lil brother Ray
thank you to all those people that have supported me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Whisper

    That was really touching. And even before finding out it was true, it sounded true. There was a really strong emotion there and it shines through. Very good. and I am so sorry for what happened to your brother. some people just can't value a life, i guess. you're in my prayers.

    wonderful poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    Im terribly sorry about your brother. :-( I understand the pain of losing someone. You're in my thoughts.

    beautiful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Robin

    That's such a shame. People are cruel. I am terribly sorry you and your brother had to go through that. My greatest apologies! A wonderful work of writing, though. You're incredible to be pushing through this.

  • 17 years ago

    by blood staind wrist

    Im am realy sorry to hear about your lose, i agree with what you say about gangs i ahte them to, i think they are all cowards and should rot in hell for what they do...
    xXxXoOoO

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    I am so sorry about your little brother ,I have 2 brothers and I could never imagine life without them.It was a very well written piece ,I am sure your brother woudl be very proud of you for you have a talent in writing.

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