Awh that was really sad love. I liked it though, the questions were a good thing to add as they made it more interesting. The flow was a bit off at some points and I think it was because of the rhymes. Maybe in a poem like this it would be better to leave it not rhyming. Good poem though! 5/5

Oops, sorry I meant to give that a 5/5 but I pressed the 4 instead.

Well written! a little choppy but why should a poem about being depressed be perfect! you communicated the feeling really well! and if u feel this way you;re not alone!

This poem touches on so many things I am feeling right now.. i love it. thanks for sharing

This was very sad and heartfelt. I'm sure many of us have felt this way also.

I thought it was very well expressed.

This is a very excelent poem and I'm sure most can relate and if they can't yet they soon will. Funny how life passes most people by while there planning for it, we often say don't worry there's always tomorrow, but one day there won't be. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Awww i know how you feel this is a great poem... i can definately relate to all the questions in this poem and the main one i can relate to is ...

Have you ever felt so very alone?
Like everyone has betrayed you?
And left you to survive on your own?

I love that stanza. Great poem and im sure every one can relate to atleast 3 of your question just like i have. Great poem 5/5